Kya sach me pyar itna hi achha hota hai?

"Kya sach me pyar itna hi achha hota hai?"


Kya sach me pyar itna hi achha hota hai?
Han mana pyar me sab suhana sa lagta hai har taraf ishq ka maykhana sa lagta hai
Par kuch wakt baad ku sab bita zamana sa lagta h

Kya sach me pyar itna hi achha hota hai?
Han mana pyar me ek rishta ajeej banta hai
Par dusre naate khokar kisko achha lagta hai

Kya sach me pyar itna hi achha hota hai?
Han mana sapne naye bunte hai manjile kareeb lagti hai
Par haqeekat se koso dur ho jana, ajeeb lagta hai

Kya sach me pyar itna hi achha hota hai?
Han mana koi har wakt aapki khushi ka khayal rakhta hai
Par bhula dena khud ki khushi dusre shakhs ki khatir kyun baimana sa lagta hai

Kya sach me pyar itna hi achha hota hai?
Han mana koi faasla nahi rehta dono ke bich sab ek ho jata hai
Par kho dena pehchan khud ki apni hi nazaron me kuch anmana sa lagta hai

Kya sach me pyar itna hi achha hota hai?
Han mana hazar waade hazar kasme khate h log mohabbat nibhane ki khatir
Par halat badal jane par un waadon ka badal jana bahut khalta hai

Kya sach me pyar itna hi achha hota hai???


Comments

  1. ShoumApril 28, 2020 at 2:59 PM

    You need to add some urdu words to make the lines rich ,try to write your thought in 4 lines ,no doubt you have grwat thoughts but they need good words to be expressed

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    1. Neha's WordsMay 4, 2020 at 3:13 PM

      If I will write poem using mostly urdu words it will get difficult to understand for all. We can express ourselves in hindi also.

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  2. UnknownMay 2, 2020 at 10:37 PM

    Kuch logo ko ye tera likha hua puri tarah se unki jindagi ki aapbiti lagegi🤪

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  3. Hitesh VyasMay 2, 2020 at 11:20 PM

    Bahut hi dil kingehri baat likhi h

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    1. Neha's WordsMay 3, 2020 at 10:56 AM

      Thanku Hitesh
      I just wish that People who read my poems can feel it in their Soul

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  4. UnknownMay 2, 2020 at 11:59 PM

    Awsome du

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  5. PriyankaMay 3, 2020 at 9:43 AM

    👏👌

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  6. Sandeep singhMay 3, 2020 at 7:20 PM

    Ma'am☺.... Nice, osm, amazing, suberb.... Is just a words.... You justify better☺☺

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  7. Sandeep singhMay 3, 2020 at 7:21 PM

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  8. UnknownMay 3, 2020 at 7:29 PM

    Nice

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  9. Vijay yadavMay 5, 2020 at 9:30 PM

    Nice neha

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  10. Akshay jainMay 10, 2020 at 8:19 AM

    Ha apne kaam se pyar itna hi acha hota h... 😊

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